Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Dancing in Love’s Glow

Missing image

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dusk, hastily slides over landscape as Sun,

now a dwindling vestige, skitters

along the horizon like

 

a bright orange leaf on a pond, blown about

by prevailing winds, it knows its

place, relenting to

 

Night’s veil and lovers who hold each other

tight, sway to the beat of

their own hearts...

 

as Moon and Stars, set the ambience.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 9 of 9

  • pattyann4500
    May 19, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love the way you have expressed the beauty of dusk breaking. I even enjoyed your breaks which made your piece more dramatic and interesting. Thank you so much for this lovely entry. Patricia


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    May 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    beautiful words penned here MJ. Your imagery sends me to another time, another place. Thank you. * hug* Juls


  • CountryCousin
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    You are.

    You are an incurable romantic and quite the poet. It is so pleasant to sit down and read these instead of the usual clamor on the news. That is why I like being here.


  • tara wilson gold member
    May 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    what a lovely ambiance this poem & night is...


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is so beautiful...so filled with light, soft light... simply beautiful. You do have a soft touch and I so love that about your poetry, Michael - keep that touch...

    ~ Nicolette


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    May 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    *sniff* beautiful...


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    What a beautiful lanscape you wove with your words... you have the softest touch when it comes to romantic writes... just gorgeous!


  • mzmikki
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is beatiful picture and a beautiful poem!!! It gave me a feeling of such peace and serenity....


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful scenery, lovers in a moment of intimacy and the magic of your words...artistry at its finest.

    My best wishes to you in the contest dear.

    Always
    Margaret

1 - 9 of 9