Cluster-fuck on portal's bulkhead,
dingy clanked ravenous
tangerines of slight
almond taste,
sweet serene slumber.
Author notes
IeeeeOH Chicotie!
15 words
Prompt:
"Sometimes I like to wrap myself around a bit of confusion, and pretend those off center patterns are normal" - Mark Griffin
A contest entry
- Quickie for the restless still awake 10-15-15 by Cerulean Sunrise.
300 points, ended May 16, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done gold. I am always looking for ways to use the term "cluster-fuck" in a poem (should there really be a hyphen?). That and the word exsanguinate, another of my favorites.
Great little poem.
Garrison
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Think I hyphenated cluster fuck so that it would not be mistaken as individual word meanings ... not necessary for those that know but felt compelled to enter it as so.
Many thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Steve
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Brilliant!!!
Congratulations on winning the golden chalice!!!
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Green?‼
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i totally didnt get this lol i think im just tired tho
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Very unique, nice work! Best of luck to you!! xx
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talk about original!
great take on tghe prompt!
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Love the take and flow.
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Wow! Excellent piece of originality and depth. You had me from the first word lol. Abstract and so well woven. Nicely done!
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Wonderful use of brevity and choice words. great word selection. An enjoyable view of the prompt from your minds eye. Best wishes in the comp
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hehe... freaking fantastic!! I just love how you keep your random titles too 
Ahhh sweet insanity....
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oo i love your title ^-^ i want some marmalade wisdom tea with small tapioca and fatty pondering pot stickers oo ^^ yummy teaa is goood
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ewwwwww iced tea!! That's sooo not British!!
hehe.. good luck!
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yeah ... not german either! But I see you are contemplating.
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