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Muddy Intentions

I wipe my twisted feet
on the welcome mat of creativity ~

painting a chaotic dance...

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Prompt:

"Sometimes I like to wrap myself around a bit of confusion, and pretend those off center patterns are normal" - Mark Griffin

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Lovely


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Ahh ... twisted. I love the images this brings to mind.

    Quite the canvas you have painted!

    Steve


  • In Too Deep1
    May 16, 2008

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    I can imagine the rhythm sending hips to and fro, causing old men like me to ache in joints and ego! Lol

    This is a very creative and unique take on the prompt. I love how you have stepped out of the box and created flow and emotion. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    I think I know that dance well!!! Wonderfully creative... love it