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The strength of beauty

My daisies
have broken the footpath

softly...

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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Ah what a gorgeous image! It reminds of a trailed woods that I often visited when I was young. My friends and I would go in there and spend hours at at time following the trails that others before us had made. I pictured that place and your daisies interrupting the path--a beautiful change from the mundane, from the expected. Wonderful poetry!


  • In Too Deep1
    May 15, 2008
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    Simply beautiful


  • Blooming Poet
    May 15, 2008
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    ahh, so lovely.