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Madness is Mysterious

Madness is a mystery
Deep in the mind
Synapses connecting too fast
Too slowly
Not
Delirium, paranoia ...
Insanity consuming all.

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  • CherylAnn
    May 16, 2008
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    my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...

  • CherylAnn
    May 16, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt...Love the last two lines as they stood perfectly to support the message...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~


  • LeilaJayne
    May 15, 2008
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    I love this, especially the synapses line. Great write. Best of luck xxx