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Let Me Be Broken

Give me 
           Strength


To bypass


Your
      Door

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    wow ~ I just love this. Such depth and meaning within few words. This leapt of the screen and grabbed me intensely. I see gold here... x


  • Blooming Poet
    May 15, 2008
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    wow. I have felt like this very much lately. I just broke up with someone, so I can relate