Vibrant red flutes
blaring introduction,
melodic chorus
of petals flow
Soft winds blow
forming fragrant
bridge.
Trumpeting
fanfare blares,
Spring bursts
on the scene.
Nature's song
performed...
blossoms of verse.
Author notes
Symphonic Gardens
A contest entry
- Bear's PIF by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Just stopped back to say Congrats!! on the well-deserved Silver!!!
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Oh, this is so pretty, what a beautiful use of poetic harmony to make the garden come alive. Congrats on your silver!
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Holy Wow!
Each stanza is chocked full of stunning Imagery.....and each stanza spoke to me personally....LOVED IT!
Simplly beautiful in chorus....your Tone is sensational......your Flow is soooo graceful and sound ~
I will have a Very hard time placing this write.....you are up against some excellent entries Julie :)
One of the best for sure.....and your format is perfectly choreographed ~
Thank you so much for entering,
...God bless you and your entry, always,
Bear ~
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Very nicely done!! I love how you started this - and the ending is perfect!
Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a lovely poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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