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Stuck In Your Mind

Power
Vanity
Insanity
Love
Lust

And more...

A contest entry

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  • Starcrossed Dreamer
    August 24, 2008
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    I find that I enjoy poetry that is simplistic. To the point. And lastly the kind that you can take anything away from. This has all of that. The language you chose is strong. It demonstrates a whirlwind of things that anyone and everyone can relate to.

    Fantastic


  • Blooming Poet
    May 15, 2008
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    Interesting. I was kinda hoping for more shaping, but it works.