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Asphalt To Dirt

When the asphalt turns to dirt
&& the sun fades from bright orange to black
Then I'll start walking back
To your arms

But right now I only see you as a distant memory
In the corners of my heart
My shoes are dirty
From walking so long
Through everything I've been through
Baby baby
Please understand.
It's something I've had to do
For so long
I love you I love you


((Not done...Writers block...damn you.))

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    LOL. I can see this transforming into a song....just rearrange a few lines, add a chorus and Voila!!

    Nice write in the works...I hope to come back and read when it is finished

    ASM