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True Housewives

Glazed perfection
crafts wisdoms honor.
Humbled discretely
before cautions breeze.

Rushing rage
clutters downfalls.
Pleasing everyone
till depression haunts me.

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Prompt~Desperate Housewives

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    Aww that's so sad... putting everyone first will do that often... wonderfully worded!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    Profoundly detailed and truly creative... x


  • In Too Deep1
    May 15, 2008

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    Beautiful take on the prompt my friend. You have always had a way with words of wisdom, emotion and movement. This is wonderful penning. Best wishes in the comp