Your eyes reflect
the grand collection of glimmering stars.
I look into you and feel,
that I'm out of this world.
You take me with you everytime.
You didn't ask at first,
but it's stellar.
You make me feel stellar.
Author notes
short. i know. its probably not my best but thats wat I had in mind at the time. Hope you like.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I enjoyed it.. It's what I might say to Star Trek's 'Q', if he took me on a tour of the Universe..
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i think its really good! ^^ i could see how this person is treating you, they are stellar, a very inspirational piece!
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Short yet very expressive piece... but sometimes few thoughtfully selected lines can say more than a thousand words...
Beautiful poem, nicely done! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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