Beautiful

Feeling so weak to the world
in love with a beautiful girl
makes my head twirl
Shes everything i see
and everything i need
so perfect to me
I sit here so sick
this pain is unrealistic
she makes me so poetic
I love her till the end
and past what i intend
no matter what she'll always be more then my friend...

A contest entry

IT'S ALIVE ................ (PREWRITES ALLOWED) by Alex Hex. 300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments

By me, right now

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Ethereal Bard
May 16, 2008
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it ryhmes well
movedon
May 16, 2008
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This has such a feeling of love. Well done!

best of luck,
Mylee and Alex