Quiet delight
All alone looking out to sea
Quiet delight
Naught but sky and ocean in sight
Frothy waves mesmerizing me
My mind, soul at peace, worry free
Quiet delight.
In a list
A contest entry
- Free Rein - with Hints... by RedAquarius.
425 points, ended May 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah, this form fits that prompt nicely I think. A very relaxing, soft feeling to this write and I love the word "frothy"; it's very evocative for a visual. Good luck and thanks for entering the contest!
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I really like what you have done with this form... the pictures that your words create are beautiful
just reading this poem is relaxing! Good luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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You always amaze me the forms you write so gifted you are and I see in your collection some new ones in the lists.
I think I have forgotten some of the forms how to do them because its been so long. Of course I could look them up and it all come back to me. Must be a age thing lol... This is lovely very peaceful and relaxing love ya,
Grandaughter of your heart, Me ♥
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