Hidden beneath
The surface of her skin I
l
a
y
Waiting for release...
Out into the world
To do more damage
Author notes
Prompt: mysterious madness
10 poets
20 words
30 minutes
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by CherylAnn.
400 points, ended May 16, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty always appreciated
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This has got quite an eerie feel to it. I really like it. It's hard to convey that with so few words but you have done so nicely. Great write.
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Now who is the one beign scary lol . This was done very well A wonderful chill went up my spine
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Very good
Very good, but sort of worthy of The X Files. -
You're the most creative and simultaneously technical savvy poet that I read. I'm always floored with your ability to harness both talents and weave the words into amazing works of art.
And your humble about it!
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whut ever!! this one was nothing but a fart on a page!
it sucked and was boring, but thanks 
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my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...
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Well I must say that this is a little freaky...Good take on the prompt...Hidden and hope it stays that way
Sounding out an alarm for this sounds like a disease that I would not want indeed...My minds eyes is freaking out
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
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Wow this creeped me out! When i clicked on it the picture actually made me jump, and the write goes perfectly with it, very good take on the prompt, it gave me chills! Best of luck!! xx
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LOL~OK~Put the gun down
Prompt is mysterious madness
Good Luck -
I did not!!!! you crazy mexican!!! *puts the gun away*
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you 2. guns and mexicans oh God. JK
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sounds like cinco de mayo
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EEYYAA!! lol.. heck yeah!!! lol.
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arrrrrrriba!! aye hay hay haaaaaaaaay!!! *snaps caballero whip*
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LOL. Sounds like I should run for my life.
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ahaaaah! so you admit you had the gun!!
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