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Messed Up

Cleaning up messes all the time
Making everything neat
Washing your hands constantly
Freaking out if anything isn't perfect
Insane

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Prompt is mysterious madness

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  • this is dark & mysterious.
    i like it!


  • SpiritDarkmaiden
    June 23, 2008

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    LMAO! Mental case? I looove the pic I hope you're not insane...


  • peridotPixi
    May 23, 2008

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    stewie is so totaly locked in mysterious madness, i really like how you have used this cute little picture of him to add more humor to your messed up mental case poem its really cute and deep and i wanted to start laughing when i first saw stewie, you are a wonderful writer, keep those wonderful words flowing, ♥amy


  • Re-invention silver member
    May 18, 2008
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    lol love the pic.. kinda funny though... great one simple and clean.. good luck!

  • EternallyEternity
    May 17, 2008

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    lol, i like the pic with it. it reminds me of some OCD people i know, lol. i like this, it's different. i like the subject of OCD as a mysterious madness, it sure is. a good piece


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 17, 2008

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    Funny one to read. Always a pleasure to clean up after everything. Good work on this!!

  • SoccerXvida
    May 16, 2008
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    i like this, its different form other things i've read. this is great!!!


  • CherylAnn
    May 15, 2008

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    OCD is definitely a mysterious madness...One can never be free from the insane craze of the mental complication of this very mysterious madness...Good title also...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~


  • LeilaJayne
    May 15, 2008
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    OCD... it is indeed a mystery, unique take on the prompt. Best of luck xxx


  • Angelflower
    May 15, 2008

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    LMAO!!! this was just too freaking funny!!!
    Oh man.. My sides hurt!!! I love it!! you did a great job hun, the picture really brings it home..
    Best of luck.

    Angel

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