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decepted

humble beginnings with moon saucer eyes
hypnotize conception within the mind
shouldering worlds creating magnetic pressure
under burdensome wonders unfurled

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prompt: mysterious madness

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  • CherylAnn
    May 16, 2008
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    my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...


  • CherylAnn
    May 16, 2008

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    A mysterious madness indeed...I could not have said it better myself...And I love the imagery you placed in the pen as it paints a powerful picture...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~

  • CherylAnn
    May 15, 2008
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    Prompt is mysterious madness
    Good Luck