Deluding minds
Seeing things not real
In life
Unsolved cases float
inside...
Love?
Way must it disappear again?
My M
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Author notes
10 poets
20 words
30 minutes
Prompt:mysterious madness
Words: 20
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by CherylAnn.
400 points, ended May 16, 2008, 10 entries
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The space for love swallowed by an invented world of substitution.
Yes, stay 'mad' enough to be dissatisfied with this and hunt the 'Real', you'll never be without company.
Should 'Way must it...' be 'Why must it...' ? Or is that the 'madness'?
I think it works either way.
Your 'mad' friend. Sol
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Haha.. I never said that I wasn't
I'm glad that you liked this..
Angel
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my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...
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I'm sorry..
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Thanks for your comment on my poem, i had just clicked on yours to comment when it appeared hehe!
This is amazing! Great take on the prompt. Wish you the best of luck!! xxxxx
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Great take on the prompt as love can be truly maddening from the mystery of it...When it all falls apart we fall into that void of madness that ones self can't hardly crawl out from...
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
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Prompt is mysterious madness
Good Luck
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