In your absence
I die in pure agony
My final breath
Calls out
Hoping
To know why
You left me
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by CherylAnn.
400 points, ended May 16, 2008, 10 entries
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HOODWINK!
I like to hoodwink poems far far back in poets' collections because it is fun to see what they were doing way back then. 
I ask "why" all the time, too, good poet. 
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good solid honest write!
i wish i could give you eyes of the future to see...
sometimes we don't understand why...things are Not
meant to be....
i wasted way too many years wondering and letting it all
chip away at me...and come to find out...
nasty bas..d was just shallow not man enough to let
ANYONE know why...always making his mate's feel it
was ALL their fault...
I thought later, i should have kissed myself Lucky
to be rid of that man!
ears/Seattle
now he gets to give the next girl all the insecurities
he gave you...with NO reasons why!
weird, huh!
ears/Seattle
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dark sweety
great job -
my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...
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nice poem seeking to unravel mystery
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Aww this was so sad, beautifully written though! Best of luck to you! xx
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ooh.. this was so sad.. you did a wonderful job!!
Great take on the prompt hun.. best of luck.
Angel
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Awwwwwwwww this is sad and could feel the heart break...Seeing someone sitting secluded from the world...Needing to know why is just the icing on a tormenting cake...Good take on the prompt...
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
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Prompt is mysterious madness
Good Luck
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