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Its all a mystery...

 

 Taunting voices,

    corrupt my mind,

      with useless profanity..

 

             No justification,

        merely causing,

    incurable insanity.

 

 

  Could this be Lucifer

      destroying humanity?

 

 

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Prompt: Mysterious madness.
20 words.

A contest entry

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Wonderful write!!! Insanity indeed!!

    YAYYY for the Gold...


    xx


  • CherylAnn
    May 16, 2008
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    my computer messed up and is not letting me end the contest...


  • Angelflower
    May 15, 2008

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    Woah!!! this just blew me out of the water!!(if I was a fish that is.) you did a wonderful job!! I love this!! great write hun.. Best of luck!..

    Angel

  • CherylAnn
    May 15, 2008

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    WOW

    Now I definitely could see and feel this pen with a clear vision in my minds eye...Powerfully done...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~


  • CherylAnn
    May 15, 2008
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    Prompt is mysterious madness
    Good Luck

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