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Cheese

American or swiss,
provlone or meunster?
So very many choices,
how is one to choose?

Mozzerella or parmesean,
pepper jack or coby?
Are you really inclined,
to choose just one?

Then there's shredded and sliced,
grated and crumbled.
All this talk about cheese,
makes me want Subway!

Pimento or ricotta,
cottage or nacho?
The possibilities are endless!
I don't think I'll ever make up my mind!

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This is dedicated to Josh Bachman.

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  • Autumn Whisper
    September 2, 2008

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    Great poem SadLittleKitten, very good. I myself am not a huge fan of cheese, but I do like Nacho, Monterey Jack and Leerdammer - they're gorgeous. Anyway, fab poem once again - just all round fun, nice one
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • LalalalaLoopstah gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    I, personally, have never been inspired by cheese!! I like that this is unique, it is refreshing to read!! You do have a typo in the first stanza, I believe "coby" should be colby, but I could be wrong. Thanks for giving us something different to read!!


  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    May 15, 2008
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    cute! I like Cheese!!!


  • Olivias Violin
    May 15, 2008
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    I love cheese


  • baconboy
    May 15, 2008

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    Mmmm

    Now I'm so hungry.
    cottege should be cottage.
    munster should be meunster.
    Very cute!

    BB<><>

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