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anger

this anger consumes me
this anger is all around me
this anger will not leave me
this anger is all around me and i can not leave it for i have been consumed withi it
i live with this anger because i do not know any other way 2 live 4 i have lived wih anger all my life
i cant leave this anger so i will stay there 4 ever please help im dieing from this
anger s all around me it consumes mme and is me

i am anger

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  • mrs. random silver member
    May 17

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    I hate anger. Personally, I'm just a freaking happy person. I find anger to be a wasted emotion. But you put it beautifully!

    Mylee
  • celadia
    May 16
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    IS true that anger is a dangerous thing, I hope you resolve your feelings.


  • AmyPixiDust
    May 16

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    i think that this poem is nice it has a lot of feelings and says so much, i would watch the spelling and maybe brake those long lines, and also write the numbers, other then that this is really deep keep up the writing, -Amy