the night's
milky moon drips
splattered stars
Author notes
Ok, so i thought i would tackle this before i get a whole bunch of comments stating the whole 5-7-5 syllable standard haiku is not presented here...well, I myself was stuck in that mind set when it came to haikus, until i visited haikumonk's page...wow did that throw me for a loop! I did not get his haikus! until i read what a haiku really is....I tried a new process that i just learned...what is it? check this link out... http://allpoetry.com/column/show/423262 ...credit - haikumonk...He is an awesome teacher! This is my first approach to this new style...so be gentle...lol --this is a haiku (L1 fragment; L2 and L3 Phrase)
A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu and Pixiku by Samplette.
1000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely
congrates on the gold
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Awesome imagery in this haiku. Still you stick with the origin of the haiku. Beautifully done. Good luck.
Kelli -
ps...the only problem is the capital in the first line...oopsie...
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This is what I was hoping I'd get a lot of. Very nicely done. I like the 5-7-5, but this is the stronger of haiku to me. Very nicely done. Beautiful. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Thank you for the nice comment
Oh, and i fixed that capital "T" for ya...Yikes! lol.
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