Outside the world waits to be explored.
You yearn to play outside
Where the Wild Things are.
To live for any and all possible experiences
But you're trapped.
By those who claim to protect.
They've closed the doors to
The Other World
And opened the windows
To let you breathe...
You live through only glimpses
And are forced to make a life picture
From a puzzle missing pieces
Too important to miss...
Author notes
starlightresurrects
basically its about my over-protective parents that let me hv very limited freedom to explore the world even though i like NEED to just for the experiences...
A contest entry
- To Start Things Off... by Starlight-Owl.
300 points, ended July 2, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions please... I want to know what you actually think so don't sugar-coat your comments.
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very nice ^_^ it convays the truth in such an intresting way...i like it.
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I like this. It was interesting. Almost seemed like a well woven collage.
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ok i did it GOSH@ happy now?!?!?!?!? lol jk
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Very.
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Oh wow, this is really interesting ^^
I'm impressed sweetie
Love your stuff
Loves mummy ^^ xx
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