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Female writing from Males POV

So beautiful was the woman I met
On the corner that first day
Her lovely eyes caught my sight
And somehow I couldn’t look away.

The ravishing wonder of her gorgeous body
Caught me completely off guard
I stared at her for a couple more minutes
Until the heat in my cheeks became charred.

She glanced swiftly in my direction
Playing her sweet little game
Gently licking her tender lips
Driving me insane.

I felt the passion, the heat of the moment
As her smile lit up her face
She walked over towards me
At an agonizingly slow pace.

It felt like an episode of Baywatch
Where the babes in bikinis jog
And while my mouth waters in anticipation
My mind is left in a hazy fog.

She raised her delicate hand in greeting
And before I could even ask her name
She jumped in the arms of the man behind me
While I was caught in the oncoming rain.

Drenched, soaked and rejected,
I headed for my car
Knowing I’d never love again
Yet I knew another babe wasn’t far.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 19, 2008

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    Nicely written prose from the typical male...finding love only skin deep...Not all, but most what society calls a "HOT BABE"...is only that and nothing bright...loved this write...