Breathe…
As you begin your journey…
See words flow as nature calls…
Birds sing, cats play…
Feel peace as water falls…
Love…
Listen..
Touch… the freedom of life
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just made a metal piece that looks abstract but actually has all of the italicized words in it, made the piece for a friend for her birthday and made up this poem as her birthday card.
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nice reflection
kinda like a rest stop on a hiking trail
or a mental rest on a stressful day
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this piece, flawlessbeauty! Much appreciated.
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feel and be the peace in nature.
LOVELY
GOD BLESS...
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Thank you much, Pisces rainbow!
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This was pretty, definitely fitting for a card. Nice job!
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Kalamina - thank you, thank you (Fairy takes a bow)
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What a wonderful friend you must be indeed - a poem and a metal sculpture, as well. Wow - lucky friend!
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I've heard that a couple times now... what a great friend I am... I hope my head doesn't get too big to fit out the doorway.
Thanks so much for visiting and your kind comments, Bleep7!
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A very thoughtful gift embedded with such beauty!
Thank you for sharing this!
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Took me a bit to figure out why all of these strangers were leaving comments on this poem! An AP friend put it in the spotlight... sheesh! Thanks so much for visiting and commenting, Divided Star. Write on!
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Sweet poem. Your friend would love the poem, and happy birthday to her!
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Thank you, Alvamear!
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that is an awesome write! i luv it! good luck w/ other writes
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Thanks so much, murasaki!
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gifts that last eternity
I would like to be a friend of yours
a gift soo special that life endures
she'll be elated this you'll see
passions scribed
pure poetry...
rudolf
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Not giving it to her until the 30th, so we will see, but I know she will be happy with it and the metal piece. She's quitting her "regular" job and in a place where she can move into her massage career only now, and turning 49 on the 29th! Big things goin' on... haha. Thank you for visiting and the clappies, Rudolf.
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Very nicely done. Brief and to the point. Happy trails
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Thanks so much, davidwright.
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Impressed
If someone wrote me a poem for my Bday,...WOW
OK, I'd look at the metal thingy too...
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Hahaha! Yeah, the metal thingy is just that... a metal thingy... But, I enjoyed making it, so that's all that matters! Thanks for visiting and the clappies, shepherd23.
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I crushed an old beer can that flew on the wind into my yard... can that qualify as a Metal Piece? can I tell people it's high art and charge a fortune? please say yes!!! it's almost summer and my neighbors will be drinking tons of beer and I feel my money making muse kicking in!!!
Ok enough silliness.. Oh Miss Buddy you are SPECIAL..
Special.. Special ... what a great friend you are indeed!! I'm sure whoever recieved this thought so TOO!!!
Doc.
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Art is different for everyone, so if you want to crush beer cans and call it art - so be it! Maybe someday you will expand your skills and start stacking and gluing the crushed cans together to make something new out of them.
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You see... that is why you are the artist and I, not.
I would never think to add glue to the mix! I just thought I'd throw them around the yard at random and
call the piece "Lazy Girl Tossing Trash" but your way...
it really could be art!! I could make a beer can bust of myself!!! you inspire me! doc.
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Soooo where is my pic for my collection?????
You are just the most wonderful Bunnykins on the face of this earth (berhaps the only living breathing one at that
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Love this and of course you
Goosey
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I just started welding this week! So, you'll just have to wait until my welding muse decides that it is time to create something that is just for you and when that happens I will send it to you! Cannot push the muse or then it hides away and that is no fun at all!
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Gas
Gas, Arc, TIG, MIG, Laser, Induction ... yep, know them all
Hint - do not store butane lighter in your pocket while welding
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Haha! I'll try and remember that one.
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and clappies.
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This is very beautiful!! I hope your friend loves it because I love it! It's incredibly profound and extremely poetic! I love the extremes your poetry has! You my dear Kim are an extreme and fabulous poet.
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Rosita Bonita, always such kind words for a Momma Bella like me!
I'm soooooo luuuuuuuucky! 
(those are good tears.. haha!)
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Beautiful people always get sweet words. I love you.
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