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Male Stripper Revue


An ad in the paper
just jumped off the page:
Expert male strippers ...
at a premium wage.

From your chest to your drawers,
we take it all off --
at competitive prices,
there's no need to scoff.

We fix furniture, really ...
it's burnished and stripped;
but since we're not barbers,
you never get clipped.




Author notes

There was an ad in the Council Bluffs Nonpareil about 30-40 years ago. I made a note about the ad, and forgot it. Found it the other day and wrote the poem.

A contest entry

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  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    June 23
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    Cute very cute thankd for entering and i hope to read more from you soon.

  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 16

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    This is excellent! I was left blushing at my own dirty mind when I reached the last stanza. Wonderful play on words! I really enjoy it when poets are able to pull that off well. Thanks so much for entering my contest!

  • Selithia
    May 15

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    Ha! I really got a kick out of this.... Word choice was excellent and I loved the flow. Very smooth and very thought provoking. Cant wait to read more from you. Keep up the awesome work.
    -Selithia