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Morning awakenings; fire dancing on your tongue Awaiting gentle pushes My fingers find beginnings wrapped inside honey silk Dripping down slender thighs Lips inviting only the reality that is you |
Author notes
Picture (c) wingedlizz @ deviantART
Picture URL: http://wingedlizz.deviantart.com/art/Lust-Or-Love-85096665
Word prompt: Symphonic Gardens
for my man ~ ♥
A contest entry
- Bear's PIF by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was hot i enjoyed this a whole lot and congradulations on your trophy of victory
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Hello Son ~
You sure did dig deep in your garen to bring this symphony of tasteful thopughts into this contest ~
You have managed to look deeper than most entrants, and I stand in Ovation for your brilliant talent displayed here ~
There are some really great entries you are penning against, so cross your fingers and hope for the best ~
This is a bit more erotic than I expected, but if this is what you saw, then I shall not censor your thoughts :)
Very nice Boy,
...good luck and God bless you,
Papa Bear ~
Gay Pride in Long Beach today & tomorrow....wish you could join your Papa Bear ~
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Thank you for your thoughts Papa Bear & for the honor of HM ~
Aw, sounds fun ~ Hope it was I would have taken m'love for sure. 
We would've had a blast
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Now this is a different take on the prompt!!
Write on! Best wishes in the contest.
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This is just beautiful I love it you did a great job sweety goodluck to you in the contest wih this piece love you lots
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this is really good bro
i love you -
Ohhh nice work...a great erotic poetic piece here
Hope you do well in the contest
Cindy
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