Petals of passion
unfurl in delicate layers,
buds peaking
in continuous motion
surround the center core,
spreading outward
until exploding
into symphonies of sensations,
creating nature
in full-blown splendor
Author notes
LOL - these 30 words are what the muse sent!!! Not sure if this fits the prompt, I only saw the picture when I started typing....LOL
A contest entry
- Bear's PIF by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was good
the imagery I think was best in the first to lines, like Sensual Angel previously pointed out -
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Thank you 'Lowercase Prelude' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
best wishes
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You are most welcome. Anytime
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I personally love the first two lines of this poem of yours. the imagery is beautiful & outstanding. I really love the imagery that you've created within this write.
Congratulations on the HM.. excellent job
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Thanks kat - I'm pleased you enjoyed the lst two lines of this....lol
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HOODWINK!
Reading this beautiful poem is like stepping into a sweet garden on a summer morning. Really lovely and filled with imagery.
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Thank you so much Melodies!! Glad you enjoyed!
blessings
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Love your exploding symphony...didn't see the prompt so can only go by the words...and they are wonderful.
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Thank you so much Neon! I think if you click the contest link you can see the picture - it was a Dahlia (I think) open in full bloom, but after I wrote this the prompt came up for something to do with symphonies!...LOL
blessings
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BEAUTIFUL
HELLO and CONGRATS on the HM.I simply loved this poem.The visuals are awesome.I loved your descriptions, it is these descriptions that paint the awesome pictures in the mind of the reader.You have been a real pleasure to read.
blessings to you dear poet.
Your friend in poetry,
~Angel~
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Thank you so much 'Angel' for your lovely comment and clappies on 'burst of bloom'. I appreciate it and am pleased you enjoyed this. I almost deleted/removed it after reading the other entries...lol...but was afraid that would be rude...
blessings friend
best wishes
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So lovely the imagery...congrats!!!
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Thank you so much Az! So pleased you enjoyed 'Blooms'.
blessings
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Gorgeous ~
Check this...>>>
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fullblown
This is one of the best reads thus far.....each line is delicatly penned and thought-out ~
The motion in your entry is very unique and penned so very pretty ~
When I began reading, I could not stop, as the rolling affect of your thoughts kept me glued to your words....nicely done!
Good luck and God bless you and this entry,
Bear ~
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Thank you so much Bear for the lovely comment. I checked that link out - was I correct in using the dash in full-bloom? I wasn't sure from the link as it showed it with the dash also.
Glad you enjoyed.
blessings
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This is well done on the picture...you grabbed it...
All the best!
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Thank you so much 'crimsondew' for the lovely comment and clappies. I appreciate it and am pleased you enjoyed this.
blessings -
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Pleasure is all mine!
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Best wishes in the contest!
I like symphonies of sensation!
write on!
*PEACE*
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Thank you so much 'islekine'...appreciate it.
blessings
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This is gorgeous hunni, the alliterations fab. It flows so smoothly, the picture really did speak to you A stunning piece rich in imagery, I love it. Good luck
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Thank you so much 'LadyD'....appreciate it and am pleased you liked this. Strange how pictures can 'speak' to each person differently...lol
blessings
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Beautiful write hun .....think you did a great job , and it still fits the new prompt perfectly
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LOL - thank you so much Rob, but I have got to have one of the strangest muses around....if it's a dark picture, she sends comedy, if it's nature, she sends sensual....HELP...
should I delete?
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