petals
cadence opens
with sun’s opening score,
as magenta strings embrace sky,
robins’
duet of nature’s harmony
floats by butterfly’s breeze,
life’s crescendo
begins
percussion
of woodpecker
the garden gate
Author notes
butterfly cinquain and a haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- Bear's PIF by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Susie
What could be better than to sit on your deck in the morning with a cup of coffee and observe the beauty that you have described in your poem. -
Very nice ~
A metaphoric entry of symphonic sounds....LOVED IT!
Perfect count, of course :)
The Imagery of everything coming together as an orchestrated blend of percussion, crescendo, cadence and strings is splendid....*sigh*
Lovely Butterfly....and brilliant KU' following to wrap up the last of the symphony.....one of the best so far!
Good luck to you and your entry Susie,
....and God bless you always,
Bear ~
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SUCH WONDERFUL BEAUTY
All of this and much more is there right before our very eyes!
This is so lovely to read and brings such wonders to my mind. 
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Lovely combination!
Write on! Best wishes in the contest.
*PEACE*
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