Chalk scratching
lingers in vain attempts
of manipulation
gone awry.
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Prompt: Goodbye
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I like yours too.
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Gypsy this is amazing I love it!!!!!!
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wow...pain running across the blackened board with chalk that fades into nothingness...manipulation of ones heart...good-byes sometimes hurt...Niaish so much for sharing your thoughts with me
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Give me the chills im thinking of scratching a chalkboard with fingenails
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Excellent
Wow, powerful choice of 10 words. Congrats on the gold.
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i think of fingernails here, with the chalk-blackboards, manipulation's high pitched squeals where love should have been gentle smiles, and hence i reach the goodbye
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Thanks Ian
That is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it
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I love this metaphor. It's very deep and thought provoking. Well done!
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Deeply engaging and metaphorically expressive. Well penned and best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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