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Gardens are your Edens

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Flowers are not only beautiful,
They can be hytnotic..
Their different hues,
Create their own rainbows of beauty!
So look witin
And talk to these flowers.
They have feelings too.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    May 17, 2008
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    Hi Dave ~

    Watch out for so many Pronouns ~

     

    Capping each line is a no, no.....for me....as it tends to disrupt Flow :)

     

    Beautiful 30 words chosen......personification with your Subject is really nice ~

     

    Thank you so much for entering,

     

    ....God bless you and your entry,

    Bear ~


  • islekine gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Nicely penned!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*