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Synphonies of love.

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Your love is

instrumental

it resounds in the

ocean of passion

as we ride on the

crest of one wave-lenght.

 

Pull tight the strings

of my heart

for they hold strong

a bridge that only

I can cross.

 

We'll compose

synphonies of love

have sunrises, seas

and starlight skies

as our orchestra.

 

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 17

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    Nice blend of ocean and love. Enjoyed riding "the crest of one wave length." 2nd stanza especially strong. Thank you for your entry!
    Marlene


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    May 17

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    Brilliant!!!

    A perfect blend of muse and nature. I read this poem several times, as it took my breath away with its magical charm. Best of luck in this contest, you've written yet another winner, Poetess!!! Peace & love, Cyn


  • Sagerider gold member
    May 16
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    I love this one.

    Great metaphors, How sweet. I love it. I missed seeing you on the site.


  • FransB silver member
    May 15

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    My friend

    this is beautful. Even without the picture, one can 'see' and 'experience'. Best in the contest for you. Frans


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    May 15
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    It sings Love, C


  • Celtic Legend
    May 15

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    this is absolutely beautiful! awesome! A Symphonie of Love what a wonderful topic! great imagery too!
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