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Sex Slave

Lustful passion
burning desires ignited
intensified with your touch
hunger from within
ecstasy, rapture,
control is all mine
do as I say, you’re my
slave, do it or you'll  pay

Author notes

dedicated to my AP husband silentstorms

So I want you to pen me 30 words of pure emotion!!

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A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Poetic Obscenity
    May 31

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    Wow. That's amazing. Short and sadistically sweet. I love it!!

    Great write indeed. I never thought i could get some much emotion from something so little. ^.^


  • Wayne Leon Learmond gold member
    May 26

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    I can see why this won a trophy. I like this a lot. It is very powerful and really paints an image in the mind. Well done indeed.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

  • light insight silver member
    May 16

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    Excellent

    Very deserving of the trophy and demanding of that AP hubby of yours! As always, a wonderful write. Steamy at that. Rhon


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15
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    You is nawty!

  • Rianna Bear silver member
    May 15
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    er, you hope so you don't sound silly for admitting YOU like it!!

  • Blue Eyed Man gold member
    May 15

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    Great

    You are getting this Slave thang down rather well.If I diddn't know you any better I'd say that you were into this sort of stuff. Great write! Good luck with the contest.


  • Hekate gold member
    May 15

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    Well, I guess then that I should be you're slave cause...what would happen if I didn't say that


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 15

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    Oh.. I like it.. It's packed with a lot of domination I think.. lol.. thats what us girls need to be more like!! You did a wonderful job I think.. Really shows how you want control and how you just take it!! I really liked this.. great write..

    Best of luck!!
    Angel
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