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Mourning Writes

I suppose
there will come a time
when I’ll pen you into long-ago tense
but for now      still

you Are

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  • james119
    May 16, 2008

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    Good use of formatting.
    Poignant and pensive...
    This touches my heart.


    Thanks for sharing this sensitive write.


    • tightrope
      May 18, 2008
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      Thank you, James.

      I am considering switching around a couple of lines. It's funny how I change my mind like that - days, weeks, months or years later.

      Leon