i get on the computer,
every day and night,
and every day i wonder if a bought somthing i dont like,
i may have clicked an add or 2 and bought a fridge or radio,
and maybe won a free hair cut but to only get an afro,
maybe won a porn double large fold out play-boy book,
or maybe won one million dollars so a family can bail out a crook,
theres so many thing i may have bought,
or won,
or stole,
or hacked,
but listen here not in 1000 years will there be the likes of that.
A contest entry
- Winklings & Friends #94 "A Man In Love Can Be a Donkey" Any genre by Winklings.
5000 points, ended July 15, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i love computers but heres the dangers of web surfing
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I don't think we quite hit the prompt with this one but I did enjoy the read. Best of luck in the contest. ~Pamela
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100 words exactly. somthing should be something though dont needs an apostrophe as well as theres needs to be there's. I will be back just checking word count and obvious typos at the moment.
~Pamela
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I am not sure how to
interpret this poem. It does not seem to link with the thrust of this contest. Perhaps author's notes would have been a help. Frans. -
Hello.
Try as I might, I cannot see the connexion with your poem and the contest. Sorry.
Lyndon of the Winklings. -
i heart this
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lol. this is the truth abou thte internet now and days!
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SO true that's mainly why im not allowed in the chat room any more
-miss ya sorry i didn't read it earlier
-nessa
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