Cloudy minds mourn dew-drops on creation's last order...
Gentle hands tickling chords of singing atoms,
celebrating rites of season's variegation,
recycled sounds with purpose; a micros-cosmos
mirrored a dying universe.
Author notes
Prompt: Symphonic Gardens
30 words.
A contest entry
- Bear's PIF by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey Nev ~
Confused here..>>>>
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/ordening
LOVED the word variegation....one of my favorite colours of plants :)
Absolutely a wonderful piece of Art you have penned ~
Wisely chosen grammar to enhance this entry.....so calm and serene to read ~
The Imagery is superb as well ~
Good luck and God bless you and your entry,
Bear ~
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aw, I ment "order" of course!
I'll fix it
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Thank you ~Bear for your wonderful comment! I shall add the link by my other favorites on my computer. By the way, its my favorite colour also.."variegation"
May the Holy Spirit always bless you,
~Nevel
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this was great piece
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