You'd think a younger man has energy
but all they want is action on their side
men my age don't set my heart aflame
their bottoms though are really rather cute
Older men know what a girl may need
a hand upon a bum cheek now and then
satisfaction guaranteed for me
I know that I'll be good for all of them
A pretty girl's a better bet by far
she knows the way to make me sit and beg
she'll warm my bum and then she'll light my fuse
then we can swap around and start again
I wish that I could find a set of three
A boy a man a girl all wanting me
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This is a great poem, you surprise me every time I read you, not only is this very good, but it says a lot about you...I have read you from the first day you joined and I find you fascinating.
All the best...Sue


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You are the fascinating one, you rhyme so beautifully.
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Oh my! Can I be that girl? You are an amazing poet, you can mold your thoughts perfectly into a verse with perfect meter. That makes me wonder who you really are. You have to be an alternate for a seasoned poet here on AP. Your meter is too good for someone who avoids rhyme like the plague.
Love,
Amera♥

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Hi Amera, have you any idea who Paula is? I think she's fantastic and I love to read her free verse, she's so good.
Love
Sue
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I'm me!
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And of course you can be the girl!
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I have a rhyming poem!!!
It stinks
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Hmmmm. My name is PerV and I'll be taking your order tonight. What will you be drinking with that? Here's a side of bunnies on the house. Ha ha ha ha.


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You only fit the middle stanza, I need starter and desert. No point eating the main part without the teaser and the reward!
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