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Hungrily You Smiled

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Sensual flick from a long wet muscle,

thick from base, thinner to tip.

Brushing rows of pearly whites, they wrestle,

with another that's as compassionate.

 

Tight within their space, they intertwine,

playfully teasing, they fuel the fire.

Sliding in and out, sensations of another kind,

erupt with heated desire.

 

Passion building, the heats intense,

shock waves dance fast and vivid.

Both drenched and hot, losing all sense,

as they sink deep down within it.

 

Rolling around in subtle play,

teasing becomes heated and wild.

Within moments, yours opens part way,

plump, swollen, hungrily you smiled.

Author notes

Okay, Tory said, there is a something behind the words...You to guess what she is describing here. Leave your comment and if you think you know what she is talking the first two that get it right, she will give each 200 points. A bonus she says.

Typed by Candacevaughnrn
Written by: Passionspromise

picture credit:unknown, New york print 1991, if you know author of pic please let me know so i can give credit properly. Thanks

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 27, 2008

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    Well now, if that isn't a fine ass dance! I am not sure if I got more out of the poem itself or the comments... both were kinda hot! LOL
    Ok, I am in a FUNKY mood today! Nice Tory, real nice. Glad to see your mind was still on the ball!

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 27, 2008
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      Oh my dear, its so much fun,
      as I wrote some heat was spun.
      Indeed i owe you this,
      one warm hug and a teasing kiss.

      thanks so much for the bronze cup,
      Now all i have to do is fill it up.
      maybe i will get one from here to assist,
      but i wont complain, you want to help with this

      thanks
      Passions


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Passionate Kiss Of The Tongue

    Love the metaphor you have described here..You are so very fun Victorious! *hug* Full of Passion indeed. ;) Thanks for being you, and sharing here. Much love sweet soul, always... Your Servant of Shadows. :f

    Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo :f


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 15, 2008

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    Erotically great




    Cin


  • Griswold silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    Nice way to describe a kiss sweetheart. Another wonderful write from you, seems your up to Passion today. Love you...Scott


  • PerVirtuous
    May 15, 2008
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    I see one of the dancers jumpped out of line. Good for you!!


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 15, 2008
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      Tory motioned two fingers...You guess wich two, she wrote down two dancers jumped out, but she kicked your ass back in line SHE is too damn funny.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Two lovers, two minutes, Two tongues, seeking bliss
    Two mouths and two passions, make one steamy kiss
    There's never a doubt when a Tory's at play
    The world will get steamy and wet for a day!


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 15, 2008

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      In then out, two tongues at play,
      Lover to lover, passions displayed.
      Lips to lips, tongue to tongue,
      two distant lovers having fun.

      A kiss from Jeff the giver of dreams
      has stolen the heart of Passion it seems.
      Lips to lips, tongue to tongue
      world class enjoyment has just begun.


      • cricketjeff gold member
        May 16, 2008
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        Tongue on tongue and lip on lip
        Further down the finger slip
        Passions swapped in life or dream
        Kissing the lady that's the cream!


        • PassionsPromise gold member
          May 17, 2008
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          On my lips to my hips
          I am sure to do a flip.
          Heat is made and that’s all fine
          Now take a dip one last time.

          Tempting hot, I am yours
          Lets feel that kiss, just once more
          Buckle fast at the knees,
          Second thought, lets finish please.


      • Griswold silver member
        May 15, 2008
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        Interesting, wonder what would happen if i were to write something like this to somebody but you. i would get told to fuck off probably. Scott

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