Perfect hour glass love
tuning out
rhythms for graceful steps,
unaware strings
taut and snap
under waters of mistrust,
drowning steadily
in tears avalanche.
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #3 - Quickie by marlene47.
600 points, ended May 18, 17 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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deep poem dear sister, It moves readers..in tears avalanche
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Glad I could do that with this poem!
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deep poem dear sister, It moves readers..in tears avalanche
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Enjoyed the hourglass love tale of mistrust. Thank you for your entry! Marlene
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Words of largeness with great insight and depth, very well done, I think.
Good luck to you in the contest.
Sol
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful words for so few, great take on the prompt. Best of luck!
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Thank you very much!
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