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Fragrance embraced

Faltering in intertwined paths,
I feel soul
being nudged gently
into your flowery haven,
blooms caressing my heart,

ticking halts
making way for delight,
watching me sway
in love's symphony.

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Symphonic Gardens

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  • Arkbear gold member
    May 17

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    Hi Firdous ~

    Love the movement within your words....very nice ~

     

    Wisely chosen 30 words of beauty ~

     

    I feel soul*...is awkward.....as I think you meant to say...*my* soul.....but then you'd have 31 words :)

     

    Lovely entry,

     

    ....good luck and God bless,

     

    Bear ~

  • individuality gold member
    May 17

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    ah sweet love, fregant with the perfum of musical flowers, bobbing in the breeze of life, a good piece.


  • aboomer silver member
    May 16

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    Well done! I love the 'blooms caressing my heart' and 'watching me sway in love's symphony'.
    Lovely!
    best wishes in the contest.


  • islekine
    May 16
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    Nice take on the prompt.

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*

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