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He cries



He cries
often
exaggerates
threatens
smashes plates
begs
screams
calls names
sometimes
it's all the same.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 16

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    he sounds pretty scary.

    somethings got hold of him.

    very descriptive,

    you have created quite a

    picture of a soul controled

    by their ego.

    again very scary

    God bless...

  • SammyStarxx
    May 15
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    i really like this a lot.
    its short and simple
    but it has a lot of emotion
    awesome job