Frequent glares at the face of time
Tap your pencil or pen
I dont care about numbers prime
Nor the history of men
A contest entry
- in time by james119.
475 points, ended May 20, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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I love it, at first i thought the inversion on numbers prime to be lame and forced, but after reading it over a few times, i realize it's effectiveness. needs nothing more, perfect as it is.
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How educating...
If ever there was an accurate description of 2pm in school, this is definitely it. Like a snapshot. -
Short, sweet and effective. Nice rhythm rhyme and flow. School YUCK! lol. Nicely done. ~mandie~
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Ah, how clever! Short, sweet and effective. Love it! Thanks for sharing...
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History and math classes, yuck.
Reminds me of exam time, so many years ago.
We wrote finals in the gym, under strict supervision.
Nice rhythm rhyme and flow, good economy of words.
Thanks for entering -
pithy and compact
Every schoolchild's gripe.
I hope those sentiments are long past.
JG
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Thank You
Here is to laughing at myself for having the 'nerve' to ever say I was bored. Does anyone know what Boredom means once they 'grow up'? lol. I don't.
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yep! I think we can all realate to this feeling... good luck in the contest.
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I used to feel this way too. A long, long, long time ago when I was still in school. I really enjoyed reading this one. It brought back memories and made me laugh
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