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Illusion In The Light

~You can't break me if I'm allready broken.
~You can't take back love if your heart is allready stolen.
~You can't hurt me when I'm allready damaged beyond repair.
~You can't say you want me when you don't even care either way.
~But you can try and give me the time of day.
~When you're feeling angry you can scream my name.

~If you can't control me when I'm insane, you don't deserve me on my better days.
~Why can't you realize I've allready heard these kind of lies.
~All the things you put me through, I can't begin to imagiane how hard it is to be you.
~Why can't you see that we're meant to be, but you can't seem to realize what a mess you're making.
~Several nights I'd cry myself to sleep, you really hurt me and it hit me deep.
~Sometimes I wanna tear you up inside, for all the sleepless nights during which I cried.

~Knock you down and make you crash and fall, then I would have it all except for you.
~Your eyes were made of ice and your heart of stone, realizing I feel much more content when you're not here and I'm alone.
~There's true love elsewhere which I may have found.
~At the end of the day, I realize I'm much better off without you around.
~Use me and abuse me is what you did, but it will never occur here again.
~I would rather not have you, but my friends still remain.
~I will never let you once again become my emotional drain.

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  • scenexkid
    November 9
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    awwh it's very nice

  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    The sadness that turns to anfer in this is perfectly expressed. And sounds like it is quite justified too. I love the last line, it is quite powerful. A friend of mine on here has a quote that says "The sun shines brightest after the storm"... remember that.

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  • Wow! Very passionate!

    • XxKillerKatexX
      October 14
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      heyyy tnxsm for all the comments i really worked hard on the stuff i wrote if i have time tommorow ill look at your stuff too tnx :]] x Kate
  • ohjeez.
    KATIE-MATEY!!!
    ifly!
    lol

    I amazed at your writing a lot of times!
    youre sooo good.
    -jealous-

    lol

    this is a good one :]

    <3

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