i try to get through the day but i always end up in tears
it's not that easy to forget since you been here all these years
if you were to come back i don't know what i'd do
i loved the way we'd cuddle the days we'd make smores too
i wish you were still here i wish you were not dead
it wasn't always easy even when it was all done and said
good bye my loved friend
A contest entry
- I Miss You Terribly. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended May 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - cry me a river by patsoldcat.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
its hard to lose someone
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final edit
a great write that touches all who have lost some one.
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thanks
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Thank you for your beautifully heartfelt entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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