If you were here today,
what would I say.
I would tell you,how I feel,
how I think of you,every day.
How the time was so special,
with you, no one else will do.
You are my reason I write,
I dream of you at night.
I look in the sky above,and hope
and pray it's me you love.
Is there any thing I can do,
to show how much I love you.
My feelings I have to show,
I want the world to know.
So here I am tonight,wishing I
could hold you tight.
Wishing is all I can do,
you have moved to places new.
If you see this write,
then think of me tonight,
dream of me, I will dream of you,
wishing dreams come true!
A contest entry
- Lyric Inspiration (Prewrites allowed) by Voodoo Eyes.
550 points, ended June 17, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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This is just so beautiful and is filled with so much feeling. I do hope that now you are not so missing them. This is, by the look of it one of the first poems you posted on here and it is sensational as far as I am concerned. I just love how it reads with so much love and adoration for the one you are missing. Truly well done with excellent flow and rhythm. Thanks for the great read.
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Neat enough
I always wonder how much right we have to become -quasi-obsesssed with other people. But what do I know?
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Very deep emotional piece. I like that.
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Thank you for reading.
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Very nice write, this is so full of heart. Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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very sweet
This is a beautiful poem, very well written and flows very nicely and leaves the taste of honey on my toungue! good Job!!!
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Very nice job! I like the feeling you put behind this. Good interpretation.
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Please put your option number in your author notes so that I can better judge your piece. I will not read it if this isn't done and it will be DQ'd. Thanks
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option no !
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Very Beautiful poetry Carl, lucky girl!
much love,
Catie
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Welcome to all Poetry
Hi Carl Dunford,
This is very sweet, i think you should show it to the person you love
Barbara
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