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[ I'm sitting here alone in the darkness

The pain in which you were the start....

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  • hand-in-hand
    May 17, 2008
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    such heat wrenching emotion conveyed within a line thanks for entering

  • Warrior7
    May 16, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hello WickedJuggalette27,

    An excellent one liner, enjoyed it.
    Keep writing
    Andy - Site Greeter