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i hate myself

i hate myself for i have done wrong
i hate myself for i cant endoure the pain anymore
i hate myself for i cant believe it is not anymore
i hate myself because i cant believe anymore
i hate myself for i am not going to be the same that long
i hate myself because i lost the greatest thing in love my love

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  • Your-Little-Doll
    May 19
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    this is a great write. good job =)
    xXx-xXx


  • oikevois baby silver member
    May 17

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    It does not matter how many times you fall. It's how many times you get up.

    It does not matter how many times you mess up. It's how many times you forgive yourself.

    Mylee

  • AmyPixiDust
    May 16

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    i really like your thoughts in this poem allthough the I hates seem way to repetitive maybe you could take them to every other line, i hope you hold tight -Amy


  • When Darkness Falls
    May 15

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    wow

    this is a good poem
    a little advice for the
    ending to make it seem better
    ps
    i hate myself because i lost the greatest thing in the
    world my love