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the end

                                                  it is the end
                                                  it is the end
                    even though it has never begin it is the end
for i will never begin because i will always be stuck in the end
  i can not believe this is true i can not belive it is the end
            i will never begin because it will alwaus be the end

the end

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  • oikevois baby silver member
    May 17
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    nice spacing. well done on the imagery.

    Mylee

  • AmyPixiDust
    May 16

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    this is some good thougts and some deep poetry, the alighment could use some help and a few spelling errors, but i like the detials you have used keep up the writing -Amy