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I Give Unto You

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with purest of intentions

I give unto you

my most precious possession

yours to keep

and treasure




my love forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes


15 Poets

20 words


Prompt:

Spontaneous Heart by ~karille


 

 

 

 

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    This is breath taking even in a simple form!!!!
    Well done dear poet!


  • Pearl-1
    May 18, 2008
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    wow margaret this peice is beautiful..xxx


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 16, 2008

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    Wow---beautiful verses in a minimum of well chosen words!
    --Well done and Best of luck in the contest!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 15, 2008

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    Now that says it all..

    the innocence in purest of intentions..I like that

    Such a great thought penned out here Mum


    Good luck in the contest

    CIn


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Aw, love the rhyme scheme, and message in this in this Margaret.


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    wow a lucky person would receive and hold dear this present of yours...I wish you luck!

    Simon


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Aww that is so beautiful! That is the way love should be given too... lovely hun!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    As always, so wonderfully done!


    Linda

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