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Come find me?

 

  

            Dissolved within shadows,

                      I pray for you..

 

                Acknowledge my existance?

        Embrace my offerings of passion?

 

 

 

            Heart on sleeve; I'm yours.

 

 

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20 words.
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Spontanious Heart by ~karille

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I really like your last line of this poem.

    Heart on sleeve; I'm yours.


  • SuicidalLover
    May 15, 2008

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    Ah so sweet sis. A great deep write. I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal angel


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    wow how can a person say no to this....well if they did they are foolish.

    Beautiful write



  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Perfect sis!! Offering her heart... wanting to be noticed... love it